Monday, December 5, 2011

Creativity or a Degree; Which is more valuable?

          It is the general belief that in order to get a good job in today’s economy; one must obtain a college degree, if not two.  Dale Stephens, in his interview, “The Case Against College,” questions this system.  He argues that obtaining a degree through college is killing students creativity, beginning with the lower level education (kindergarten through twelfth grade).  More specifically Stephens is taking an “uncollege” approach, claiming that students should learn through experiences.  In his opening statement, Stephens begins, “Creativity is innate – the problem is that school kills creativity..”  He is suggesting that a new system must be developed to help tackle this rising issue.  Although Stephens emphasizes the necessity for change, it must be clear that this idea of “uncollege” is not for everyone. 
            In my opinion, Stephens presents valid arguments in his overall discussion, although I have generated my own thoughts.  Stephens discusses the fact that college kills creativity and that students should look into the possibility of not attending college.  Although I have found a loss of creativity due to schooling, I believe that it is imperative that students obtain a degree to have a sustainable lifestyle.  The economy today is striving for individuals with degrees, and as an additive, creativity.  Finally, I do believe that change needs to occur in the educational system, but the steps Stephens suggests are not the right ones (to not attend college).  Attending college is an experience within itself that students need to experience, and I truly believe that reforms can be made in other areas where students still obtain college degrees.  Therefore I conclude that college has become a necessity in today’s culture, but that there is also a loss of creativity along the way; so as a result, reforms need to be made.
            The overlying theme that Stephens addresses is school killing creativity.  He focuses on the fact that college kills creativity more so than any other grade level; this I disagree with.  He refers to a study that George Land and Beth Jarman discuss in their 1998 book, “Breakpoint and Beyond.”  This study had kindergartners take divergent thinking tests to analyze one’s propensity for creativity, and then take them again after five years of ‘formal education.’  The results claim that ninety-eight percent of kindergarteners tested at the genius level and after five years of schooling only fifty percent tested at that same level.  Stephens believes that this is argument enough to prove that school kills creativity and some should pursue an “uncollege” approach to make sure that their creativity stays intact.  However, I believe that it is not just the material that is causing students to lose their creativity through loss of interest, but also the way students are being taught.  Due to standardized testing, students are being “taught for the test,” meaning that students are only learning the necessary information to pass an exam.  This has diminished the educational system, limiting children the amount of knowledge they could possess.  In this following video clip, the sitcom, “The Simpsons,” addresses the idea of standardized testing in a comical way. 


            They present the idea that standardized testing and the teaching system enforced now only allows students to follow one path in their life.  Students believe that due to the results they receive that they are only capable of certain levels in the economy, regarding occupations.  One stark contrast between the idea that standardized testing helps students and between actually creativity and knowledge level is shown in the video clip through the job Lisa Simpson is stated to obtain.  As some viewers of the show may know, Lisa is considered genius level in the school that she attends, but the aptitude test claims that she will only be a homemaker when she grows up.  This idea is instilled in many individuals minds today.  One way to expand the way of teaching and to encourage creativity is by having students involved in more projects.  Students currently participate in basic note taking, studying and exam preparatory skills which do not allow for creativity to occur.  As you will find in the following Katie Couric clip, since standardized testing is one of the foremost issues, schools have had to cut funding to music and art classes which help promote creativity.


                Although I do agree that the invention of Facebook did not occur (literally) in the classroom setting, it did involve an educational background.  Dale Stephens discusses the idea that new inventions in technology, such as Facebook, did not occur in the classroom, but rather through experimenting outside when he brings up the topic of “STEM” subjects, claiming that they are not beneficial to a student’s education.  He states, “While STEM subjects have been deemed critically important to economic development, I’m not convinced that what one studies in school has anything to do with what one does after school.”  For any thought process to occur one must have the basic understanding of education.  How would Mark Zuckerberg created Facebook without understanding how to use a computer, nevertheless how to write computer programs.  This required some educational background; therefore I argue that some education is necessary to foster our creativity and that one should attend college (regardless of what critics may say, such as Stephens).  College is a fundamental basis to surviving in the world today; without a degree one will not obtain a substantial job, without a substantial job one will not live within societal norms of a good lifestyle, without a good lifestyle one will be unhappy.  Yes, I agree that college does have some strains such as financial issues, debt being a major example, but in the end it pays off in terms of living.  Society has required individuals to obtain a degree in order to live, unlike in the past where one could survive without a college degree.  Stephens claims that one does not need a degree, but take a look at this graph and decide for yourself.

            Another reform that I would choose to make in the educational system, would be the classes students take.  Stephens believes that not attending school is the answer to making sure one’s creativity is intact, and that the world will soon come to a day when degrees are valued as much as they are now.  He states in his interview, “Although requiring people to get advanced degrees currently works, over the long term we face the potential for a degree-saturated market.”  I agree with Stephens that are society will soon be degree-saturated due to the desire for education and the requirements for jobs.  Although on the contrary, it is the competitive nature of the economy for people to acquire education.  Stephens seems to believe that our society is a cycle; that once we become degree-saturated we will return back to primitive times and minimal degrees are required.  This belief is entirely incorrect.  Once we become degree-saturated, individuals will begin to look to earn second or even third degrees (beginning to arise today).  There is nothing wrong with this idea but the fact that some college does take away our creativity and timing to accomplish all of these tasks.  Therefore I find that college should minimize the amount of general education classes students are required to take.  For a first year college undergraduate, the majority of their schedule is composed of general education classes that should be addressed in high school.  Even some of these classes should be eliminated from parts of the system all together.  I find that classes such as history should only be necessary until tenth grade, and English should conclude when students graduate from high school.  Notice on standardized tests that they mainly focus on math and English related topics; then why are we learning the history of the world up through college?  I do understand that history is a fundamental basis for society but learning bout Native Americans for three years in a row in middle school is too much.  Although I may be bias, seeing as I graduated from a highly rated high school, Irondequoit High School, those students who need the extra attention in specific areas can achieve that through personalized classes.  Included in my class options during high school were business classes.  I found that these classes should be instilled within every high school education and should be considered a core field of study (just like STEM subjects are now).  More specifically the program DECA should be woven throughout everyone’s lives because it prepares students for the future.  DECA, standing for distributive Education Clubs of America, tests high school and college students on their knowledge of basic business skills.  Through a series of conferences, students take tests and are placed in role play scenarios asking them to prove their knowledge on a specific topic.  If students qualify at the regional level they move on to the state conference and from there the national conference, where over 15,000 students compete from across the world.  Not only does DECA test students on their business knowledge, but it also involves students in community service projects and introduces them to the professional attire (through their strict dress code at conferences) necessary for even a job interview.  Watch the video below to learn more about DECA.

            From experience at the national level I can testify to the topics discussed in the above video, DECA gives students a chance to experience different career choices and network with individuals from across the globe.  The main argument that Dale Stephens brings up is that schools kill creativity and I believe that DECA is the answer to helping prevent this issue.  It brings out the creativity in students, but in an applicable way, yet also teaches them the necessary life skills. 
            However, Dale Stephens also emphasizes in his website on “uncollege” that this system is not for everyone. He addresses this idea when he claims that home-schooled children are more creative and fare higher on standardized testing than those children in the public school system.  More specifically, Stephens states, “Interestingly, home-schoolers — students who engage in full-time informal learning — outperform traditional students across the spectrum.”  I agree with Stephens that informal learning has its benefits because it puts students in a situation where they are more capable to learn from experience.  One example of this idea of home-schooling and experience can be shown through the Duggar Family, a popular show on TLC.  The Duggar children are home-schooled yet the family participates in many community service activities, vacations, and takes advantage of tutoring services that allow for their informal learning to foster creativity.  In support of Stephens claim that “uncollege” is for some individuals, he is correct in stating that school kills creativity.  I find that if schools take advantage of the opportunities present in today’s world (like the Duggar’s do), then formal learning will take on a partial informal curriculum that will help benefit students instead of limit them.


            In conclusion, Dale Stephens has valid arguments in his interview, “The Case Against College.”  He believes that school is killing students creativity and that something needs to be done about it.  Although Stephen’s answer to this problem is an “uncollege” approach (that college is not for everyone); this is where I disagree.  It seems to me that at nineteen, Stephens does not have enough knowledge or experience to be claiming that people should not attend college.  Although I am no older I find that students should still attend college, reforms just need to be made within the educational system.  Colleges and high schools should allow their students to choose their classes, business classes should be mandatory at high schools, standardized testing should not have as much importance as it does now, and informal learning should be implemented.  If these reforms are taken into consideration I believe that creativity will no longer be limited and our society as a whole will benefit.

Thursday, December 1, 2011

Argument Templates

  I found through using argument templates that they are a wonderful structure when arguing against, for or both with another person's view.  For example, with our use of them in assignment four.  I believe that they allowed me to understand the task at hand and gave me an outline of how in depth I needed to be.  Although I do believe that the argument templates don't get the point across quick enough.  If a reader is skimming a piece of writing they will have to look to the center of each paragraph to find the thesis that the writer is conveying.  In this respect I believe that argument templates could be reformed to each writer's preference depending on the work.

Monday, November 21, 2011

Rough Draft of Assignment #4

          It is the general belief that in order to get a good job in today’s economy; one must obtain a college degree, if not two.  Dale Stephens, in his interview, “The Case Against College,” questions this system.  He argues that obtaining a degree through college is killing students creativity, beginning with the lower level education (kindergarten through twelfth grade).  More specifically Stephens is taking an “uncollege” approach, claiming that students should learn through experiences.  In his opening statement, Stephens begins, “Creativity is innate – the problem is that school kills creativity..”  He is suggesting that a new system must be developed to help tackle this rising issue.  In conclusion, Dale Stephens emphasizes the necessity for change (involving creativity) through his arguments toward the cost of college, today’s economy, job hunting, and societal norms.
            In my opinion, Stephens presents valid arguments in his overall discussion, although I have generated my own thoughts.  Stephens discusses the fact that college kills creativity and that students should look into the possibility of not attending college.  Although I have found a loss of creativity due to schooling, I believe that it is imperative that students obtain a degree to have a sustainable lifestyle.  The economy today is striving for individuals with degrees, and as an additive, creativity.  I also agree with Stephens in the respect that college debt is something students will try to pay off as soon as possible, but I believe his estimates are incorrect.  Finally, I do believe that change needs to occur in the educational system, but the steps Stephens suggests are not the right ones (to not attend college).  Attending college is an experience within itself that students need to experience, and I truly believe that reforms can be made in other areas where students still obtain college degrees.  Therefore I conclude that college has become a necessity in today’s culture, but that there is also a loss of creativity along the way; so as a result, reforms need to be made.
            The overlying theme that Stephens addresses is school killing creativity.  He focuses on the fact that college kills creativity more so than any other grade level; this I disagree with.  He refers to a study that George Land and Beth Jarman discuss in their 1998 book, “Breakpoint and Beyond.”  This study had kindergartners take divergent thinking tests to analyze one’s propensity for creativity, and then take them again after five years of ‘formal education.’  This results claim that ninety-eight percent of kindergarteners tested at the genius level and after five years of schooling only fifty percent tested at that same level.  Stephens believes that this is argument enough to prove that school kills creativity and some should pursue an “uncollege” approach to make sure that their creativity stays intact.  However, I believe that it is not just the material that is causing students to lose their creativity through loss of interest, but also the way students are being taught.  Due to standardized testing, students are being “taught for the test,” meaning that students are only learning the necessary information to pass an exam.  This has diminished the educational system, limiting children the amount of knowledge they could possess.  In this following video clip, the sitcom, “The Simpsons,” addresses the idea of standardized testing in a comical way. 

            They present the idea that standardized testing and the teaching system enforced now only allows students to follow one path in their life.  Students believe that due to the results they receive that they are only capable of certain levels in the economy, regarding occupations.  One stark contrast between the idea that standardized testing helps students and between actually creativity and knowledge level is shown in the video clip through the job Lisa Simpson is stated to obtain.  As some viewers of the show may know, Lisa is considered genius level in the school that she attends, but the aptitude test claims that she will only be a homemaker when she grows up.  This idea is instilled in many individuals minds today.  One way to expand the way of teaching and to encourage creativity is by having students involved in more projects.  Students currently participate in basic note taking, studying and exam preparatory skills which do not allow for creativity to occur.  As you will find in the following Katie Couric clip, since standardized testing is one of the foremost issues, schools have had to cut funding to music and art classes which help promote creativity.

                Dale Stephens also brings up the topic of “STEM” subjects, claiming that they are not beneficial to a student’s education.  He states, “While STEM subjects have been deemed critically important to economic development, I’m not convinced that what one studies in school has anything to do with what one does after school.”  Stephens claims that new inventions in technology, such as Facebook, did not occur inside of the classroom, but rather through experimenting outside.  Although I do agree that the invention of Facebook did not occur (literally) in the classroom setting, it did involve an educational background.  For any thought process to occur one must have the basic understanding of education.  How would Mark Zuckerberg created Facebook without understanding how to use a computer, nevertheless how to write computer programs.  This required some educational background; therefore I argue that some education is necessary to foster our creativity and that one should attend college (regardless of what critics may say, such as Stephens).  College is a fundamental basis to surviving in the world today; without a degree one will not obtain a substantial job, without a substantial job one will not live within societal norms of a good lifestyle, without a good lifestyle one will be unhappy.  Yes I agree that college does have some strains such as financial issues, debt being a major example, but in the end it pays off in terms of living.  Society has required individuals to obtain a degree in order to live, unlike in the past where one could survive without a college degree.  This idea is depicted in the graph below showing how those with an education receive higher wages and how the need for a degree has changed overtime.
            Another reform that I would choose to make in the educational system, would be the classes students take.  Stephens believes that not attending school is the answer to making sure one’s creativity is intact, and that the world will soon come to a day when degrees are valued as much as they are now.  He states in his interview, “Although requiring people to get advanced degrees currently works, over the long term we face the potential for a degree-saturated market.”  I agree with Stephens that are society will soon be degree-saturated due to the desire for education and the requirements for jobs.  Although on the contrary, it is the competitive nature of the economy for people to acquire education.  Stephens seems to believe that our society is a cycle; that once we become degree-saturated we will return back to primitive times and minimal degrees are required.  This belief is entirely incorrect.  Once we become degree-saturated, individuals will begin to look to earn second or even third degrees (beginning to arise today).  There is nothing wrong with this idea but the fact that some college does take away our creativity and timing to accomplish all of these tasks.  Therefore I find that college should minimize the amount of general education classes students are required to take.  For a first year college undergraduate, the majority of their schedule is composed of general education classes that should be addressed in high school.  Even some of these classes should be eliminated from parts of the system all together.  I find that classes such as history should only be necessary until tenth grade, and English should conclude when students graduate from high school.  Notice on standardized tests that they mainly focus on math and English related topics; then why are we learning the history of the world up through college?  I do understand that history is a fundamental basis for society but learning bout Native Americans for three years in a row in middle school is too much.  Although I may be bias, seeing as I graduated from a highly rated high school, Irondequoit High School, those students who need the extra attention in specific areas can achieve that through personalized classes.  Included in my class options during high school were business classes.  I found that these classes should be instilled within every high school education and should be considered a core field of study (just like STEM subjects are now).  More specifically the program DECA should be woven throughout everyone’s lives because it prepares students for the future.  DECA, standing for distributive Education Clubs of America, tests high school and college students on their knowledge of basic business skills.  Through a series of conferences, students take tests and are placed in role play scenarios asking them to prove their knowledge on a specific topic.  If students qualify at the regional level they move on to the state conference and from there the national conference, where over 15,000 students compete from across the world.  Not only does DECA test students on their business knowledge, but it also involves students in community service projects and introduces them to the professional attire (through their strict dress code at conferences) necessary for even a job interview.  Watch the video below to learn more about DECA.


            From experience at the national level I can testify to the topics discussed in the above video, DECA gives students a chance to experience different career choices and network with individuals from across the globe.  The main argument that Dale Stephens brings up is that schools kill creativity and I believe that DECA is the answer to helping prevent this issue.  It brings out the creativity in students, but in an applicable way, yet also teaches them the necessary life skills. 
            A final argument that Dale Stephens addresses is the idea that home-schooled children are more creative and fare higher on standardized testing than those children in the public school system.  More specifically, Stephens states, “Interestingly, home-schoolers — students who engage in full-time informal learning — outperform traditional students across the spectrum.”  I agree with Stephens that informal learning has its benefits because it puts students in a situation where they are more capable to learn from experience.  One example of this idea of home-schooling and experience can be shown through the Duggar Family, a popular show on TLC.  The Duggar children are home-schooled yet the family participates in many community service activities, vacations, and takes advantage of tutoring services that allow for their informal learning to foster creativity.  Stephens is correct in stating that school kills creativity and I find that if schools take advantage of the opportunities present in today’s world (like the Duggar’s do), then formal learning will take on a partial informal curriculum that will help benefit students instead of limit them.

            In conclusion, Dale Stephens has valid arguments in his interview, “The Case Against College.”  He believes that school is killing students creativity and that something needs to be done about it.  Although Stephen’s answer to this problem is an “uncollege” approach; students should not attend college.  This is where I disagree with Stephens.  It seems to me that at nineteen, Stephens does not have enough knowledge or experience to be claiming that people should not attend college.  Although I am no older I find that students should still attend college, reforms just need to be made within the educational system.  Colleges and high schools should allow their students to choose their classes, business classes should be mandatory at high schools, standardized testing should not have as much importance as it does now, and informal learning should be implemented.  If these reforms are taken into consideration I believe that creativity will no longer be limited and our society as a whole will benefit.

Sunday, November 13, 2011

Ideas for Assignment #4

  I have been thinking about possible topics for assignment four and I believe that it is going to be hard for me to narrow it down to one.  I have many ideas on how I would like to set up the blog essay, but I have to pick the topic first.  Some of the topic ideas that I have are schools killing creativity, college debt, standardized curriculum or taking a look at the new article that we recieved.  In order to find a specific topic though I plan to reread all of the articles to find one that I can fully unpack.  I am trying my best to stay away from the topic of school's killing students creativity because this is what I discussed in my third assignment.

Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Classwork 11/8/11 - Argument Template

  The general argument by author Dale Stephens made in his interview, "The Case Against College," is that students should learn through experiences in life.  More specifically, Stephens argues that schools kill creativity.  He writes, "our education system cultivates a mind set where students are rewarded for following directions..."  In this passage, Stephens is suggesting that students only do the work to receive the reward.  They are not actually experiencing problem solving.  In conclusion, this lack of problem, solving shows the loss of creativity in education and that students would best succeed from experience.
   In my view, Stephens has valid arguments to make however they do not apply to everyone.  More specifically, I believe that students must experience life to learn but they also need a basic educational structure in order to formulate their ideas and opinions.

Wednesday, November 2, 2011

No Education Needed

  After discussing education thoroughly in class I find it interesting that an article would come to surface on AOL regarding job openings with no degree required.  I have included the link below for any interested.
  In general, this article discusses how one state is offering jobs to indivdiuals with no college degree and some of these individuals are making as much as $100,000.

http://jobs.aol.com/articles/2011/11/02/why-north-dakota-students-dont-need-to-graduate-to-find-jobs/?icid=maing-grid7%7Cmain5%7Cdl5%7Csec1_lnk2%7C109473

Monday, October 31, 2011

Jobs in America

  While looking through the news on AOL I came across this article and found it interesting.  It discusses the fifteen scariest jobs in the United States.  Not only did it describe the job, gave the education needed for the job, but it also gave the average salary of each job.  The salary is what made me think the most.  In this economy, not only do people sacrific their lives for our well-being (armed forces, police officer, firefighter -- some of the jobs listed) but they get paid bare minimum in order to sustain a family.  Relating this to the education we have discussed in class is that I believe this article proves regardless of if someone obtains a degree or not; there may be a very minimum amount of pay allowing them to survive on.  It is a growing issue within our economy and I find that it needs to be addressed.

Link:
http://jobs.aol.com/articles/2011/10/28/the-15-scariest-jobs/?icid=maing-grid7%7Cmain5%7Cdl9%7Csec1_lnk2%7C108787

Saturday, October 22, 2011

Assignment #3 Helpful Tips

  Now I understand this may sound a bit strange, but in order to help myself understand the task at hand, I watched a variety of videos on youtube about fables.  I am a horrible creative writer, but watching some videos such as, "Are you my mother?" or "The old lady who swallowed a fly" gave me some more insight into this creative writing piece.  Not only did it bring back memories of these times, but it stimulated my imagination (which helped a lot with this piece).  Just figured I would share some of my tips with others in case anyone needed help.

Wednesday, October 19, 2011

Genres

  In order to help me further understand the different types of genres that exist in the literary world I found this website: http://www.booknutsreadingclub.com/genrelist.html
  It defined each specific genre in a clear and concise way.  At this instance I realized while reading assignment three, that I am going to struggle.  My one weakness in writing classes is always writing about fables, or fictional pieces.  Relating this to the recent article I read, "The Case Against College," I can explain my lack of creativity due to the public education I had.  This has led to a variety of thought about what to write my piece on, which may be trying to prove how bad I am at creative writing.  I am unsure as to where to begin or what to even think about when reviewing this assignment; which leaves me with much concern, not only for the finished result, but for my grade.

"The Case Against College"

     After reading this article I have mixed emotions.  In the beginning I began to agree with Dale Stephen (the author) because I find that students creativity is limited within the educational system that we engage in.  As I read further into the article though I began to question the validity it had.  The reason for this is because we grow up believing that home-schooled children aren't as smart as those who are taught in public schools.  I do feel that they are able to express their creativity more, but I also find within my own experience with home-schooled students that they struggle to be socially accepted.  This I believe can be tested and would be argument enough to prove that despite their greater amount of creativity, home-schooled students may struggle in job situations.  I understand there are many different arguments toward this, but I find that a larger importance on creativity is necessary in public schools to help with the advancement of our society (and to keep up with the ever competitive economy).

Friday, October 14, 2011

Bell Hook's "Essentialism and Experience"

     I am not sure I truly understand why we were instructed to read a piece of literature such as this, one thought I have is to see an example of someone else’s close reading of a piece.  To help myself further understand what this passage was discussing I looked up the term Essentialism, and defined it as a belief that things have a set characteristics that make them the way that they are and that certain groups possess the same characteristics.  This allowed me to understand the relationship that was being discussed in the passage about feminism involved with race and gender.
     To allow myself to blog about this passage I am going to analyze the extent to which the author analyzed Diana Fuss’s work, “Essentially Speaking: Feminism, Nature, and Difference.”  Although it does make it difficult that I have not read her work so I cannot testify to how in depth Bell Hooks analyzed Fuss’s work, I can analyze based on the understanding I have gained.  One example of understanding I found was when Hooks stated, “Now I am troubled by the term, ‘authority of experience’….” (page 11)  I can easily relate this to our assignment two we just finished because Hooks (like us) directly quoted the author that he was analyzing in a small amount of words and attempted to unpack the quote helping the reader to further understand what the original author may have meant.  I found by reading what Hook wrote, Fuss may have concluded in her work that a student can only fully understand a class when they learn it from a professor who has first-hand experienced the information that they are teaching.  The example Hook used was learning about African American history and their society from a black professor versus a white professor.  From this one example, I find that Hook truly analyzed Fuss’s work to the extent where a reader (like myself) who has not read Diana Fuss’s work, can understand the meaning that she intended to portray.

Monday, October 10, 2011

Writing Workshops

   Looking back on the first writing assignment that we completed, and on the assignment that we are currently finishing up; I have found the writing workshops extremely useful.  At first some of the assignments are confusing, regarding the specific ideas that the teacher is looking for in the writing, but through these workshops I have been able to understand a clear idea of this.  I feel that myself and many others benefit from analyzing someone elses piece of writing because we can gain ideas, generate thoughts and recieve input that help us to analyze our own writing in a different way.
   The assignment that we are currently finishing (assignment #2) we wrote two drafts for.  I found that this was helpful as well because I was able to revise a draft that didn't specifically address the assignment task.  I think that by creating a variety of drafs and revising helps a writer become more in touch with their writing and to further deepen their understanding.  In the end, I believe that my overall final copy of a piece now shows a deeper thought process that I did not contain before because I continually asked myself to look further into my writing.

Monday, September 26, 2011

Student Writers Vs. Experienced Writers

   I recently finished reading the article "Revision Strategies of Student Writers and Experienced Adult Writers" by Nancy Sommers.  This article discusses the differences in student writing and experienced adult writing processes.  Sommers conducted a case study in which she found that student writers are brought up learning on a linear writing model; which means "first...then...finally", and when they look to revise their pieces of writing they focus on changing the vocabulary within their piece.  On the other hand, Sommers found that experienced adult writers tend to revise as they move through a piece and to make sure that the meaning is conveyed thoroughly to the audience.
   I agree with the linear model of writing because I was raised learning this way but I disagree with Sommers findings on the differences between student writers and experienced adult writers revision processes.  Based on my own writing experiences I can testify that yes, many other students and myself look to change the words within our writings to make our vocabulary more diverse; but I feel that we also look for sentence structuring, conveying an overall meaning through our explanations and structure of the overall piece.  I find that this tends to be similar to the experienced adult writers.  I would like Sommers to look at her case study and realize that her study was not large enough, she only studied college students and adults in two colleges.  I find that this may be a reason for her findings because every college has different expectations for their students and faculty, therefore I wish Sommers had conducted a larger study before publishing this article.

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Close Reading

   According to Patricia Kain, in her article "How to Do a Close Reading," she describes a close reading as taking a passage and observing the facts and details about it.  Kain considers a close reading a small part of the text or the text as a whole.  This idea contradicts with what we have discussed in class because we have focused only on close reading a small passage out of a large text.  Kain gave me this different outlook when she wrote, "Your aim may be to notice all striking features of the text, including rhetorical features, structural elements, cultural references; or, your aim may be to notice only selected features of the text—for instance, oppositions and correspondences, or particular historical references."  I found this interesting and a new perspective for me to look at when close reading (that I have the option of close reading a passage or the whole text).
   One issue that I have had when close reading is where to begin once I have read over the text.  What specifically am I supposed to analyze? Is there a specific way that I am to interpret this?  A website that I found helpful with my confusion is located at the end of this blog.  This website lays out specific questions that would help anyone when close reading.  For example, one question that pertains to imagery helped me to think about the readings in a different way; it reads, "Are there colors, sounds, physical description that appeals to the senses? Does this imagery form a pattern? Why might the author have chosen that color, sound or physical description?"  By having a small list of questions that I can refer to when close reading will seem to have a large impact on the depth of my close reading.

Links!

Patricia Kain Article "How to Do a Close Reading"
http://www.fas.harvard.edu/~wricntr/documents/CloseReading.html

Question List - "Close Reading of a Literary Passage"
https://web.cn.edu/kwheeler/reading_lit.html

Sunday, September 18, 2011

Buffalo Bills Game

First off, LETS GO BUFFALO!
   I was watching the Bills game this past sunday (Sep. 18th) and what a game it was.  Continual lead changes kept the game interesting instead of having one team wipe out another. 
   The reason I bring the bills game up in this blog is not only because I want to blog about something different but I found a realtionship to a topic I learned in my sociology class.  Football Sunday has become a "holiday" to many families across the nation.  Following the ten year anniversary of the terrorist attack on September 11th, football seems to have brought everyone together despite the sadness associated with that day.  Football sundays are an example of the sociological perspective of functionalism.  Functionalism is the theory that stresses the interdepence of the patterns of society and their interaction in maintaining social unity, culture and stability.  I found that football seems to connect the nation, no matter what team you are a fan of, everyone is connected through the competitive sport.  It is something that was recently jeopardized by the NFL lockout and many people were unsure if a season would even occur.  Thankfully, it has continued and hopefully will continue to keep unity within a society of many changes (economic, political, educational etc.).

Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Khan Academy

    I just finished reading the article on the Khan academy and I have mixed views on the topic.  I completely agree with the idea and find it an interesting way to learn.  I believe that it will help students to succeed on topics they may be struggling in a classroom where teachers cannot give the student one-on-one time.  This would be especially helpful in the large lecture halls of universities since the teacher and student do not have one-on-one time (like in previous educational systems).
    I chose to watch one of khan's videos to see for myself how his system works.  I chose to listen to a video on a topic I previously studied which is accounting.  This eleven minute video (in my mind) truly covered the concept of revenue, operating profit, gross profit and cost of goods sold.  Although it was not entirerly in depth I believe it was a good video for an accounting student to use as a review.
   The one negative opinion I have of Khan's videos is that the handwriting tended to be sloppy and sometimes the words would not appear due to his pen usage.  All together though I found the Khan Academy to be a good idea for students to use, but on top of their education in schools and universities (i.e. as a study tool).

Monday, September 5, 2011

The American Scholar--21st Century Emerson

  After finishing the reading by Emerson I have developed a better understanding of the character that Emerson is attempting to describe.  Emerson is discussing an individual that thinks for himself, yet is connected to the rest of the world through a basic similarity.  He discusses how each individual can pave their path for the future based on the knowledge that they obtain.  When thinking about how the twenty-first century Emerson would react to society today I have mixed thoughts. 
  One passage that stood out to me that would prove Emerson disagreeing with society today reads; "I learn immediately from any speaker how much he has already lived, through the poverty or the splendor of his speech. Life lies behind us as the quarry from whence we get tiles and copestones for the masonry of to-day. This is the way to learn grammar. Colleges and books only copy the language which the field and the work-yard made."  Many people in society today have begun to interact with social media at a younger age that their grammer and language has developed similarly.  For example, I have witnessed many individuals write an essay and use the language, "bc, wud, lol, omg, etc.." This is absolutely disgusting to think that despite these advances in technology, the people today are becoming dumber.  I believe that Emerson would be disappointed in this part of society today as well.
  Something that I believe Emerson would be proud of in society today is the social acceptance the world has begun to develop for those who seek different interests in society.  Emerson claims that he is bothered by the old and the new standing side by side, and that there is minimal social acceptance for eccentric minds.  "If there is any period one would desire to be born in,-- is it not the age of Revolution; when the old and the new stand side by side, and admit of being compared; when the energies of all men are searched by fear and by hope; when the historic glories of the old, can be compensated by the rich possibilities of the new era?"  I understand that this passage may mean advances in technology, but when relating it to the twenty-first century, I take it as accepting those who are different.  The world has become less discriminatory towards certain races, classes, genders, sexual preferences and other interests and I believe that Emerson would approve of this.

Tuesday, August 30, 2011

"The American Scholar" By Emerson--Difficult Passage

One passage I found difficult to understand reads as this; "In this view of him, as Man Thinking, the theory of his office is contained. Him nature solicits with all her placid, all her monitory pictures; him the past instructs; him the future invites."  I struggled with this passage mainly due to the language being used.  I was unsure of what Emerson was talking about and to whom he was referring when he mentioned 'her'.  In this case I looked up the definitions of some of the words in order to help understand the passage and my translation of the passage soon turned into; "The view of the American scholar as a thinker portrays that he is self-contained and observant.  He interacts with her calmness and warnings, learning from the past and preparing a future."  I am still continuing to struggle with the reference to a feminine body in this passage because I am unsure if it is a human, an object or a place.